So I wrote this a while back and I want to see what tumblr thinks :) (I’m not a professional writer or anything so its not perfect)
Her toes touched the yellow line as her feet shuffled forward nervously. The thoughts in her head that had settled in years ago were causing chaos behind her eyes she didn’t even recognise herself in her reflection of the windows of the passing carriages. Her eyes were red and bloodshot which seemed to glow against her pale, ill skin of starvation and lack of nutrients.
Uncontrollable Tears began to fall over her cheeks as her mind began to chase her heart and strangle it. Her skinny bony fingers touched the front of her coat and stumbled upon the zip and her delicate shaky hands yanked it down and pulled the coat from her shoulders and it flew off her body out of reach. Her half opened and exhausted eyes scanned her surroundings as the cluttered sound of the train sped towards her. She knew she had to do it and there was no other choice to escape the screams of the demons that inhabited her brain.
She leaned her body forward with the little strength she had left as the noises drew closer her hair felt like knives on her cold and battered face she could almost feel the freedom from hell already when a warm arm took her shoulder pulling her backwards and collapsing into the arms of this unknown person. The radiating heat of this creatures body brought her eyes to meet with that of the person and saw only the watery green eyes of the person of which she’d yearned for for too long. The rain fell over them in the middle of the platform yet she never felt more protected he had saved her from her own mind